Tuesday, 13 November 2012

Senses....and the School Fair

Today for writing we talked about the senses we felt at the school fair, then we did this fantastic writing.

Have a read of our stories....

At the Fair
I saw
I heard
I tasted
I smelt
I felt



The School Fair
By Melad

At the fair I saw people.



The School Fair
By Jarod

At the fair I saw candy floss.
I heard sausages cooking.
I tasted sausages.
I smelt yummy things.


The School Fair
By Kai Ying

At the fair I saw people eating candy floss.
It was a good school fair. 
I saw my friends.
I head the toys being played with.
I tasted sausages.
I smelt the candy floss.


The School Fair
By Max

At the fair I saw a bouncy castle.


The School Fair
By Charlotte B

At the fair I saw the people in the big bubbles.



The School Fair
By Bailey

At the fair I saw Dad.


The School Fair
By Rory

At the fair I saw my brother doing the horizontal bungey.
I heard the rope coming out of the truck.


The School Fair
By Imogen

At the fair I saw the candy floss.
I heard the water splashing when the teachers got dunked!
I tasted the candy floss.


The School Fair
By Lily

At the fair I saw Charlotte.
I heard the ice blocks.
I tasted ice blocks.
I felt happy.
I smelt sausages sizzling.


The School Fair
By Ava

At the fair I saw the Fairy Grotto.
I went into the Fairy Grotto with my Mum and I heard the Fairy Grotto music.  I heard the rabbits sniffling.
I tasted some candy floss, it tasted delicious. 
I felt happy. 
I smelt candy floss cooking.


The School Fair
By Charlotte D

At the fair I saw people in the big bubbles.
I heard the sausages cooking.
I tasted delicious candy floss.
I felt happy.
I smelt the sausages cooking.



The School Fair
By Rachel

At the fair I saw my Dad and my Mum.
I heard fairies.
I tasted candy floss.
I felt so happy.
I smelt the bubbles.






























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